Comments on: EA: “Sony Can Win the Console Race” http://www.ps3vault.com/ea-sony-can-win-the-console-race-2449 PS3Vault offers news and reviews for the latest PS3 games. Tue, 16 Mar 2010 23:32:09 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.2 hourly 1 By: PS3Vault http://www.ps3vault.com/ea-sony-can-win-the-console-race-2449/comment-page-1#comment-39494 PS3Vault Sun, 02 Dec 2007 06:08:48 +0000 http://www.ps3vault.com/ea-sony-can-win-the-console-race-2449#comment-39494 Jon, this was a copy from a press release. I didn't write this article. Some I do write, some staff does, and some we copy from the source where allowed. I'll try to read over them more closely so thanks for the heads up. Jon, this was a copy from a press release. I didn’t write this article. Some I do write, some staff does, and some we copy from the source where allowed. I’ll try to read over them more closely so thanks for the heads up.

]]> By: Jon http://www.ps3vault.com/ea-sony-can-win-the-console-race-2449/comment-page-1#comment-39468 Jon Sat, 01 Dec 2007 20:13:35 +0000 http://www.ps3vault.com/ea-sony-can-win-the-console-race-2449#comment-39468 This was the most broken, fragmented, sputtering, ill-formed post I've ever read here. I suggest we have these post read out-load instead of relying on the "inside voice" of your head. Obviously how you think, or form sentences is unintelligible to normal people. Let me qualify this by saying I'm no English genius either, but I'm amazed at how even one of your own people is appalled by those paragraphs. Firstly, you open the first paragraph with a quote, but never close the quote. I'd love to know what "Xbox 360 pasting the opposition" means, perhaps meant "passing"? What exactly does "recent increase in stock shiftage" mean to you? I think that might mean the stock (available units), or perhaps Sony stock, as in shares sold at financial market. IF the former was the case, then shiftage is redundant, doesn't add anything (ending a sentence with a preposition is not allowed in English) because it makes the most sense to simply, and concisely write "after Sony's recent increase of PS3 stock". Also, by "cash-flow flush", what do you mean? the cash has be flushed, and flowed? Where did the cash go? This was the most broken, fragmented, sputtering, ill-formed post I’ve ever read here.

I suggest we have these post read out-load instead of relying on the “inside voice” of your head. Obviously how you think, or form sentences is unintelligible to normal people.

Let me qualify this by saying I’m no English genius either, but I’m amazed at how even one of your own people is appalled by those paragraphs.

Firstly, you open the first paragraph with a quote, but never close the quote. I’d love to know what “Xbox 360 pasting the opposition” means, perhaps meant “passing”? What exactly does “recent increase in stock shiftage” mean to you? I think that might mean the stock (available units), or perhaps Sony stock, as in shares sold at financial market. IF the former was the case, then shiftage is redundant, doesn’t add anything (ending a sentence with a preposition is not allowed in English) because it makes the most sense to simply, and concisely write “after Sony’s recent increase of PS3 stock”. Also, by “cash-flow flush”, what do you mean? the cash has be flushed, and flowed? Where did the cash go?

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